Poems / Rhymes / Poetry
01.08.2006 um 15:00 you have grown to be to me
not to be with me?
not to be with me?
I´m sitting here
in this cold room.
I´m dreaming of my life, how it has supposed to be.
I close my eyes
and I see you.
You pulled me in the dark, you were not good for me.
Not good for me....
My skin is cold.
My eyes are dead.
Now everything is gone and I´m away with it.
I won´t come back.
Everything´s out.
You had the chance to love, but you had ignored it.
Had ignored it....
Why have you lost?
What have I done?
I was your little girl and you threw me away.
Now I´m broken.
And you´re to blame.
Everything is never like it´s supposed to be.
Supposed to be...
Mockingjay schrieb:I´m dreaming of my life, how it has supposed to be.how it WAS supposed to be
Mockingjay schrieb:Now everything is gone and I´m away with it.I would replace the word "away" and use "gone" instead
Mockingjay schrieb:You had the chance to love, but you had ignored it.leave out the second "had" just say "but you ignored it"
Mockingjay schrieb:Everything is neverthere is one word for this: "nothing", so you should write "nothing is like it is supposed to be"
Mockingjay schrieb:I´m writing english because we are in the english category. I hope it´s okay ^^No, it's certainly not. You have to write Mandarin in the English rubric. It's absolutely obvious! Isn't it?